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Contemporary Haiku (rules in my authoree notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: The Old Man by Gypsy Blue Rose

       

       old man sits on a stump —

in his mind

the tree house

 

 

Author Notes
CONTEMPORARY HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less. click here to read haiku examples
click here to read haiku rules click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule click here for season words

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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