Excellent A Distorted Diablo Rejected by JLR Artwork by jesuel at FanArtReview.com

That darn Devil dances when a lost soul drops in. What were this soul's chances? Did he not have thick skin? No more backward glances. Fallen dead on his chin! His original plan, pre-ordained, was to settle right in from the start. Knowing as a babe, he came unstained, a young do-gooder who was quite smart. But then his decisions became strained. Doing little things not on his chart and time and again, as Dad explained, get on your feet and follow your heart. But, his willful choices were harebrained. Then that old Devil stared and wagged his finger come. Smoke rose. His nostrils flared. He yelled, "See what you've done." You are much too fair-haired! Go back. You're too humdrum!   Author Notes Potlatch writing entry: The elements of the Distorted Diablo are: - 3 stanzas- a sixain, a nonet, a sixain, in that order. syllabic: - the sixains are written with 6 syllables per line - the 9-line stanza is written with 9 syllables per line *rhymed at the discretion of the poet. Thank you for the use of the fall by jesuel on FanArtReview.com

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