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Gogyohka Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Another Argument by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

another argument‚

scared son hides in the closet

with his crayon drawings

of happy mom and dad

on the walls

 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
- National Domestic Violence Hotline: 800-799-7233 more information

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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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