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Contemporary Senryu (for rules ck author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Mom's Funeral by Gypsy Blue Rose
skeleton flowers are real

 
   

Mom’s funeral,

   absent son sent—

invisible 

skeleton flowers

 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Ghost-like "SKELETON FLOWERS" turn transparent when it rains.

CONTEMPORARY SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last two, called the SATORI. It's written in 1 to 4 lines and 17 syllables OR LESS.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

pictures from my Pinterest account

     

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