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after love by isabelteeth
Betrayal writing prompt entry

It convinces you it knows you and pretends to loosen its steady pedestal

thrashing in the rain, it watches.

sometimes, you slip in a puddle and pretend to run ahead of it all  

seen: eerily, knowledgeably

you sense a wrench is near –

of heart, of water

what if there were flowers? Then would you be happy here?

 


Writing Prompt
Write a poem in any form or style with Betrayal as the central theme.

     

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