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Sestet free verse suite
2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
: Last Night by Gypsy Blue Rose

last night

you came by

in a dark dream

and even in dreams

you had to hide

with your bag of lies

now you belong 

to someone else

and it’s her turn to cry

for your cheating ways

and nobody 

can change that

we had our love

we had  our laughs

it wasn’t a good idea

but I was young

and I learned my lesson

at last

 


Author Notes
six lines suite free verse

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