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Quatrains with 3 syllables per line
2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
: The Proposal by Gypsy Blue Rose

he proposed  

and his voice   

cast a spell 

over me 

 

 

 

thereafter,  

silence fell  

upon us  

like a veil

 

  

 

and quiet 

crimson leaves  

danced and dived  

to the ground 

 

 

touched my face

tenderly  

and earth hummed  

his love song  

 

 

his body  

sighed waiting,  

my answer  

rode the breeze  

 

 

then I knew  

I meant to   

be in this  

blest moment  

 

 

yes, I do!

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Quatrains with 3 syllables per line and one line at the end. I created this form.

Cast = Over centuries, the word 'cast' has changed, now the past tense form of cast is 'cast'

thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,

Gypsy

     

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