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Naani
Breathless by Wils
Naani poetry writing prompt entry

 
Deep inhale of the airways
Bring it into the lungs
Coughing and gasping
There's a blockage somewhere 


Writing Prompt
A naani consists of 4 lines, the total lines consist of 20 to 25 syllables.

Example:

A dialogue
When lengthens
Remain questions
Without answer as criticism.

Author Notes
A descriptive naani of my recent bout of pneumonia.

     

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