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Yamato Uta Poem for the Japanese Poetry Club
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: The Unbearable Ache of Longing by Gypsy Blue Rose
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my beloved  witnesses
the things I do

the bad choices I make
yet
he doesn't judge


he hears the doubt
in my mind
and he doesn't leave me
behind


from the start
I feel an unbearable ache
of longing  and loving him
 

Author Notes
free verse in lower case without punctuation

Yamato uta is a Japanese poetry form written in FREE VERSE which means no rules or rhyme and can be as long as you like. Poets created THE YAMATO UTA POEM during the Heian Period 700 century.

"Yamato-uta is composed of many words born from people" hearts, as leaves grow from seeds. People use these words to express their thoughts about what they see or hear. click here if you want to read more

thank you very much for reading my poem,

gypsy

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