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Contemporary Tanka Suite (rules in my author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Tanka
: * Creatures of the Night * by Gypsy Blue Rose

  
 
whisper my name

as I shiver in your arms

    on the plush grass—

neath the sheltering willow tree

and the blood-red moon



there's no place to hide

   nor do I want to run—

I'm not repelled

by your cold touch and tender bites

I'll be yours till the end of time
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
"Listen to them, the children of the night. What music they make!" - Bram Stoker's Dracula

CONTEMPORARY TANKA has its seeds in the human heart and mind. IT grows into the myriad leaves of words and phrases expressing what the poet thinks and feels in her or his heart. Tanka are beautifully lyrical and they are often about love, loss, longing, and similar aspects of our emotional lives,

Throughout Japanese history, women have been the best tanka poets. Tanka originated in the imperial court where men and women exchanged tanka poems after a night together. The poems were deeply passionate. Women poets were committed to a life of both religions consciousness and erotic intensity.

Pivot lines are feature of Japanese tanka and are often a feature of in English tanka, but it�¢??s not necessary. A pivot line, is usually written on line 3, can be read sensibly with lines 1 and 2, and lines 4 and 5, a property that can be used to introduce ambiguity and resonance into the poem. * click here if you want to read modern tanka examples * click here to join the Tanka Society of America * click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.

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