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Haiku (for rules ck author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Rise Up by Gypsy Blue Rose

s u n f l o w e r s 

rise up in the spring rain

with soulful exaltation

 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Rise Up is a beautiful and soulful song. It means that people can rise up for each other to help and care for.

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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