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An entry for the club challenge
Does Anybody Care? by kahpot
Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

 
 
here in our little corner of the world

we sleep on empty stomachs ~

nothing ever changes
 
 

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Author Notes
- 3 lines.
- 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
- No rhymes.

Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it's uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
A poem for the homeless and the hungry
Thank you, Shelly Kaye for leading this club
Thank you, MoonWillow for the artwork

     

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