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Senryu
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: ~ Every Night ~ by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 

every night,

   my husband in his man cave—

loneliness


Author Notes
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One thing is to be alone and another is being lonely. You can live alone and be happy. You can be in a relationship and be lonely. A man cave is not the problem.

"Let there be spaces in your togetherness, And let the winds of the heavens dance between you. Love one another but make not a bond of love: Let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls." - Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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