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Feelings of melancholy and nostalgia in early adulthood
Weddings of Exes by Colleen The Garbanzo Bean
20 Syllable Poem contest entry
Artwork by nikman at FanArtReview.com

My Past

Building Futures

yet, i’m adrift

In the Binding Shadows

Of skyscrapers

 

Author Notes
My analysis, though you can take what you want from this poem: Every choice seems to have a consequence, and the narrator is trapped by her decision to follow a career. As she walks by the tall buildings and sees her reflection in the windows, she recalls a younger version of herself who followed love. Those she has loved before are finding wives and building families while she has built a name for herself. A name that comes with a reputation that can feel like prison.

     

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