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It was too late for him.
Not Welcome by HarryT
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Judy's husband, Tom, had gone deep sea fishing three months ago and never returned.
 
The back door creaked open. A gust of wind whipped in. There he stood, with a sheepish grin on his doleful face. He held out a hand, and said, “I’m sorry, I thought I loved her and she loved me.” Judy’s face turned a fiery red.
 
She backed away and said, “I’m sorry too, but you are not welcome. My high school sweetheart has moved in."


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Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
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