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Love Sedoka (for rules please see my author notes)
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: I will Wait for You by Gypsy Blue Rose
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I will wait for you

at the edge of summer dusk.

Will you come to share the night?



I will come, my love,

you are the air in my lungs.

I'll embrace you until dawn.
 
 
 


 

Author Notes
A Love Sedoka: is a Japanese unrhymed love poem that was created in the 8th century. FORM: 5/7/7 - 5/7/7. In the first verse (5/7/7) one lover poses a question to another. The second verse (5/7/7) is the lover's reply.


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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus


     

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