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tanaga potlatch entry
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The heavens are a vast home
To those whose hearts like to roam
Far above the earthly loam
Among mounts of divine dome

To those moved to fly like birds
At a pilot's direct words
To places that others purred
About; said it'd be absurd

No to move among the mist
So paradise won't be missed
And true inner peace is kissed
In nature's beauty and bliss

Only to wish in a week
With newly sun-kissed tan cheeks
And a heart that's newly meek
To a home you'll ever seek

Author Notes
a tanaga is
untitled
any number of quatrains.
seven syllable per line.
the original tanaga was aaaa bbbb cccc etc
The modern one can use any rhyme scheme

     

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