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Gogyohka Poem
2023 Gypsy's Tanka
: Muse Amidst Butterflies by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
 
my muse wades in the lake

amidst fluttering wings

as her bare skin sparkles in the sun

    like a million diamonds—

butterflies in my stomach
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia
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