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modern haiku suite with reaping monostich
2023 Gypsy's Haiku
: I am Jealous by Gypsy Blue Rose
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   I'm Jealous of the Moon ...


as her silver beams
wander across your face
chasing shadows

 ~

   I'm Jealous of the Breeze ...

 

as she caresses
your chest hair and eyelids
then tickles your neck
 


    I'm Jealous of the Flowers ...
 


sweet honeysuckle
mix with your amber cologne
and my lavender candle
 


I am Jealous
 
 
 
 

 

Author Notes
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. It was created in the 17th century by Zen Monk, Matsuo Basho. Haiku alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English and Japanese syllables are different. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


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