Exceptional Gogyohka Poem Suitees 2023 Gypsy's Tanka : Venus Rises by Gypsy Blue Rose

tangled in bright stars she'll guide you across the universe  dipped in constellations and your kindred soul   ~€~   crystal drops of Jupiter dripped down her radiant face    and her wish upon a star hair— she makes love to you in dreams and her scent lingers on your bed   ~€~   her shooting star gown and Saturn rings     shine in the sizzling sun— veils of desire flow between your hands dancing to the rhythm of your heart     Author Notes "She takes just like a woman She makes love just like a woman And she aches just like a woman But she breaks just like a little girl" - Bob Dylan - Just Like a Woman Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. source = writers digest source=wikipedia Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy picture from pinterest

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