Did the warm Southern Sea
touch your cheeks?
Did it caress your face with love?
I lie in a bed of roses
dreaming about our last kiss.
We are a flash of light
amidst eternal dreams.
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Author Notes
SIJO poem is a traditional Korean poetic form related to haiku and tanka. Sijo is comprised of 44-46 syllables. Themes can be romantic, metaphysical, reflection, or spiritual. Originally it was written in four lines but it's okay to write it in more. THE FIRST STANZA IS THEME: 3,4,4,4; THE SECOND STANZA IS ELABORATION: 3,4,4,4; THE THIRD STANZA IS COUNTER THEME: 3,5.; THE FOURTH STANZA IS COMPLETION: 4,3
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
picture from pinterest
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