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Busso Poem
2023 Gypsy's Clubs
: Touching at Sunset by Gypsy Blue Rose
poem in black font in my author notes

Touching at Sunset
 
 
touching at sunset,

when bloodroots close for the night,

    consumed by yearning —

by morning you will be gone

and leave me cocooned, again,

on your warm side of the bed
 
 
 



 
 

 

Author Notes
Bloodroot flowers are early spring bloomers found growing wild in the sun in wooded areas. The close-up at night produces beautiful solitary flowers.

POEM IN BLACK FONT
touching at sunset,
when bloodroots close for the night,
consumed by yearning â??
by morning you will be gone
and leave me cocooned, again,
on your warm side of the bed

BUSSO BUSSO (Bussokusekika) is an old rare form of Japanese poetry that consists of six lines written in a 5-7-5-7-7-7 syllables pattern. Created in the 8th century and was written from 710 to 1185. They are usually written about religion or philosophical beliefs but contemporary Busso can be any subject. source

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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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