Exceptional Senryu Suite with one transitional line 2023 Gypsy's Haiku : Across the Universe by Gypsy Blue Rose For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes

~ Across the Universe ~ she doesn't know I exist though my heart beats like drums when she passes by my Queen of the Universe the moon and sun are jealous of her radiant glow and ardent rays illuminating her stellar path she doesn't need extravagant perfumes in crystal spray-bottles her intoxicating scent of rose and jasmine follows where she goes with her royal crown of flowers   Author Notes Ardent = glowing like fire; burning, fiery, or hot: SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy pictures from pinterest

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