Excellent Senryu Suite with one line refrains 2023 Gypsy's Haiku : I'm a Creep by Gypsy Blue Rose For Dean

here in the shadows I die slowly day by day knowing deep inside   you don't even know my name   I follow you   step by step to catch a glimpse   of your beautiful face   you don't even know my name   but I'm a creep   and no one you would care   to know well     you don't even know my name   I wonder what would take   for you to turn around   and see Me at last   you don't even know my name   the voice inside me tells me what to do with you l will grab a gun   and I will be the last thing you see         Author Notes I woke up in the middle of the night and this poem came to mind. Getting ready for Halloween, another creepy poem ... hehehe. I used a senryu suite and one line refrain SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy pictures from pinterest Gypsy

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