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My recent attack on the 18th of September.
South Carolina
: Man O War by Ricky1024

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.
Background
Follows with another Amazing and Incredibles Journey Entitled,
"Bull Shark By the Tail?"

"Man O War"
Written on September 19th, 2023
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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Tonight was just right for a fight!
Now reviewers hold on tight!?
The 18th evening seemed so right?
The ocean at at beach was well within my reach.
...
The crescent moon above but below.
Don't you know?
These creatures move incredibly slow!
But between you and me.
There will be?
Good morning, meets the eye!
...
There would be no love. No turtle dove.
150 yd offshore. You can be sure by now must implore.
And now quite sure you see?
The man of war down below.
Had a grasp of me!
Now don't you know?
...
My upper left arm lower left leg from arm to ankle.
Yes, I felt the sting!
No angels below would sing.
Like acid burning the ocean now churning!
Now I have to curse!
*Fuc*!
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Author Notes
*Fuc* Adjective.
/fuc*/
1.a foul and exploitative word .
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Note: The Man of War is a dangerous member of the jellyfish family.
Lurking usually quite far out at from the shore.
Because it is dark blue in color.
It's known as a bottleneck.
But what the heck!
...
They do have stingers and they can be intruded into the human body. Luckily, I pulled away in time.
The toxin is very dangerous and it's very rare to die from it but it will slow down your breathing system.
When I was involved I was 150 yards offshore about 18 ft deep.
I was enjoying the beautiful crescent moon lying on my back for a while and decided to swim back in.
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It was very calm in the evening
I had no idea that 150 yd in that I would brush against this thing!
Think of an octopus rather large with tentacles about 8 to 10 ft long and entangling your arm and brushing against your body.
This thing first felt as if it was a burning sensation multiplied by stings from actual hornets.
As a time progressed, it turned into a acid type burning feeling which was incredibly raw

The given treatment is warm water and vinegar which is supposed to help loosen any attachments. There was no attachments.
I wanted a cool cloth or ice pack which they said makes it worse.
In all actuality it is recommended to ice it after the procedure and there's nothing listed medically about vinegar and helping with the treatment.
Lesson learned.
Do not swim too Deeply off Myrtle Beach during the month of September!
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Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His only Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Talented Artist and Writer, 'Doctor Ricky 1024'
And, his Incredible Picture Entitled,
"Man O War Bite"

     

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