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Modern Haiku
2023 Gypsy's Haiku
: Wintry Barren Road by Gypsy Blue Rose
Rules in author notes

no one walks

    this wintry barren road—

but me and my friend

the cold moon
 
 
 

Author Notes
The Cold Moon is the full moon in December click here if you want to see the moon almanac

This week we are writing full moon haiku in the Haiku Club. click here if you want to check the club
3/6/5/3 = 17 syllables

Modern Haiku is a brief Japanese poem that epitomizes a single moment. The form is 17 syllables or LESS, in 1 to 4 lines as brief as possible. It doesn't have to follow the 5/7/5 pattern because Japanese and English syllables are not the same. It uses the juxtaposition of two concrete images, often a universal condition of nature and a particular aspect of human experience, in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. The best haiku alludes to the season of the year. Poetic devices may be used. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view.. -- modern haiku rules -- modern haiku examples If you have any haiku questions, don't hesitate to contact me.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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