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Four Lines Modern Haiku
2023 Gypsy's Haiku
: Rain on the Roof by Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku in black font and rules in author notes

 
 
 
spring drizzle 
plays a tune on the roof—
poor man's
night at the symphony
 
 
 

Author Notes
spring drizzle
plays a tune on the roof--
poorman's
night at the symphony

3 -6- 2 -6 = 17 syllables

Modern haiku is written in one to four lines with 17 or less syllables. modern Haiku rules

Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry made of short, unrhymed lines that evoke natural imagery. The haiku gives a moment of insight based on observation.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

     

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