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Gogyohka Poem
2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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~ I will Follow you ~
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Are my Venus rays too far?
I know every night you look up
to the dark massive sky
searching for my bright light—
hold on for a wondrous ride
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Author Notes
Venus is the second planet closest to the sun. Venus is the second brightest object at night only behind the moon. Venus has comet-like tail rays caused by the interaction of its atmosphere with the solar wind and the Sun's magnetic field. ,more info
Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===href=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gogy%C5%8Dka>source=wikipedia
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Gypsy
"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation." -Kahlil Gibran
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