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3/8/6 Senryu
2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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You and Me
by Gypsy Blue Rose
poem in black font in my author notes
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you and me
tangled in a tangerine dream
dusted with golden dusk
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Author Notes
you and me
tangled in tangerine sunset
dusted with golden dusk
Tangerine Dream is the name of a German music band, no relation to the poem
SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.
for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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