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waves inch on hot sands
I run in the cool ocean
relief for my feet
working at checkout
a cool tub of warm water
relief for my feet
chasing fast toddler
running all day I fall down
relief for my feet
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| Writing Prompt |
In this this haiku suite, the final 5-syllabe line
, (satori) in each haiku must be the same. For example read my haiku suite "Just a Little Rain"
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sudden burst of wind
scatters the cherry blossoms
just a little rain
Geisha's umbrella
catches petals in the breeze
just a little rain
old woman cries as
pink showers evoke the past
just a little rain
Normally a haiku is nature related but feel free to choose your own topic. |
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