coquette Venus
kisses rivers full of stars —
match made in heaven
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Author Notes
"match made in heaven" is a famous phrase meaning a perfect couple.
Zen is the philosophy that we are all interconnected in nature, including humans. Separation is a source of fear and suffering. In this haiku, I use personification to show the connection between Venus, Earth, Rivers, and Stars. With this kind of haiku, you can use all the poetic devices, unlike regular haiku.
ZEN HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It originated in the thirteenth century and was mastered a century later by Matsuo Basho. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI.. Haiku is about nature and it alludes to a season of the year. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation. Avoid metaphor and personification, you write about what you can SEE. === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES === click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule === Modern Haiku
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind and helpful review.
Gypsy hugs
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." - Picasso
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