Cold
wind cuts
like sharp glass.
Alpine crow flies
over the tallest peaks —
Mount Everest in its eyes
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Author Notes
-- I'm counting 'Everest'; as 2 syllables [ ev-rist ]
-- Mount Everest heigh 29,029, in Nepal, China
-- Alpine chough is a bird in the crow family. It breeds in high mountains like Mount Everest in Nepal, China. It nests at a higher altitude than any other bird.
Modern Haiku is a brief Japanese poem that epitomizes a single moment. The form is 17 syllables or LESS, in 1 to 4 lines as brief as possible. It doesn't have to follow the 5/7/5 pattern because Japanese and English syllables are not the same. It uses the juxtaposition of two concrete images, often a universal condition of nature and a particular aspect of human experience, in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. The best haiku alludes to the season of the year. Poetic devices may be used. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view.. -- modern haiku rules -- modern haiku examples If you have any haiku questions, don't hesitate to contact me.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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