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5/7/5 Poem for the contest
2023 Gypsy's Haiku
: On a Windy Day by Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry

 

torn from stretching limbs

   dive into rapid river —

fallen plum blossoms

 

 

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Author Notes
5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules, just the syllables and lines count. Since the rules of 5/7/5 poems are only line and syllable count, some 5/7/5 are haiku but it's not required.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

painting by Yienkeat

     

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