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2023 Gypsy's Haiku
: Covering the Sun by Gypsy Blue Rose
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boy lies on the grass

    covering the sun —

with his thumb

 

 

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Author Notes
I couldn't find an exact picture. You'll have to use your imagination. LoL

SENRYU is a Japanese poetic form similar to haiku. It's written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS usually in a shot/long/short form. Senryu is about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't need a season word (kigo) but it's okay if you do. It never rhymes. It uses imagery.

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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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