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5/7/7 Katauta Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: Left Behind by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
crow flights over field

    leaving his old friend behind —

raindrops down the straw man's eyes
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
"you are made of dreams and this world is not for you" - unknown

KATAUTA is an unrhymed Japanese form consisting of 19 syllables with a 5/7/7 pattern. They are usually humorous but don't have to be. A pair of katautas is called a sedoka. click here for more info

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