Excellent Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 One Thousand Cranes : Black Rain by Gypsy Blue Rose

cold and cruel black rain       covers our withered front yard cause you are not here       to embrace me ... anymore midst sombered shadows       of our abandoned dark home you took the sunshine       and promises to grow old       together ... but I'm alone           Author Notes CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus picture from deviantart.com

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