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JIYU-SHI poem for the Japanese Poetic Club
One Thousand Cranes
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Harbor Gray Morning
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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harbor gray morning
cooled by southern salty sea
stirred sorrowful blues
of pain that won't go away
so I prayed for hope
and a sign that I am loved —
a breeze caressed me
while the high tide kissed my toes
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Author Notes
Jiyu-Shi poem consists of a combination of 5/7 syllables stanzas. You may write as many stanzas as you like and any topic. It never rhymes. The two 5/7 stanza lines are connected grammatically.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. It's an entry for this week's challenge for the Japanese Poetry Club. Everyone is welcome to join.
Gypsy hugs
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