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One Thousand Cranes
: Your Embrace by Gypsy Blue Rose


 
your strong embrace

doesn't happen anymore

and our home belongs

to somebody we don't know


Your cologne lingers

with Calvin Klein Obsession

tangled in our sheets

and the unwashed shirt I kept

only thing you left behind



 
 
 

Author Notes
Calvin Klein Obsession = men's cologne

CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

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Gypsy
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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