Exceptional Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 One Thousand Cranes : Nonsensical Musings by Gypsy Blue Rose

Let me dip my feet to check how cold are your waves, and should I dive-in  onto your darkest deep end? Will you drown my heart with passionate algae tides midst exotic fish and turbulent current hugs? When I wake, will you be there?         Author Notes CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, Choka was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus picture from pinterest.com

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