Exceptional Modern Tanka Suite One Thousand Cranes : Our First Home by Gypsy Blue Rose What Is Love Poetry contest entry For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes

Yearning for your touch    and a thousand kisses   all over me  —          as incessant rain and wind          play a tune on our window glass       morning light sneaks through   slanted blinds with fairy dust   —        that covers your cinnamon         and sugared skin                                       enticing my need to taste  our laughter echoes   throughout our empty first home —       all we need for now          is our comfy sturdy bed          and a table for two         Recognized Author Notes TANKA is a Japanese unrhymed love poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The first English-speaking poets imitated the Japanese models of 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines, but because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables the poems were too wordy and choppy. The beginning two lines are descriptive and image-focused, and the third line serves as a transition to the bottom two lines which are reflective using metaphor, simile, or personification. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. Tanka originated in the seventh century in the Japanese Imperial Court, where women and men engaged in courtship. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis Picture from pinterest.com

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