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Kojiki 5/7/5 5/7/5 7/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club
One Thousand Cranes
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Caught in the Wind of Love
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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tossed and spun around
caught in the warm wind of love —
whirling pirouettes
speeding out of control
wounded by your killer smile
and magnetic charm
want to be the one you love
from this day until I die
I am yours and you are mine
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Author Notes
Pirouette = a whirling about on the points of the toes, as in ballet dancing.
The Kojiki is divided into three parts: upper 5/7/5 - middle 5/7/5 - lower 7/7/7 syllables count. it uses a kigo (one seasonal reference: winter, summer, spring, or autumn). You may tell a real part of our history, a personal story, or a fictional story. Keep it simple. HISTORY of KOJIKI It's the oldest poetic form that dates back to the year 712. It's a compilation of poetic history and mythology passed on by mouth from generation to generation in the 8th century before written Japanese existed.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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