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A Merry~go~Rhyme Poem, to a Beloved FS Friend
Birthdays
: A Slightly Belated Birthday Wish by Debi Pick Marquette

 

Her birthday, April Twenty Six

From her awesome land, down under

Almost like a bag of tricks

My mind just seemed to wander

So on her day, I couldn't fix

 

I did not have a photograph

To her, that doesn't matter

And I don't need to make her laugh

Instead my poetry chatter

This pic I found on her behalf 

 

 

Her Prose/Poetry beautiful 

She sweetly spoils her muse

With feedback that's so useable

You can't beat her reviews

And all of it so suitable

 

Was married over fifty years

But a few short years ago

She had to say goodbye, with tears

To the man whom she loved so

She's doing much better, it appears.

 

She's a gem to all who know her

A lovely diamond in the skies

A ruby if you would prefer

A Pearl within our eyes

Who's Precious like no other

 

Your day with family was great

Memories will never end

Dear Valda, it's never too late

Our love to you we send 

For that you'll never wait

 


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Author Notes
My Merry~go~Rhyme poems don't need to be in meter, must be in a fun format, stanza's out of the ordinary four lines, and they must rhyme. This one for Pearl Edwards (Valda) is ABABA

I accidentally misplaced Valdas birthday info, and didn't realize it until last night. By then I was so tired from being w siblings all day, so decided to wait until I was better rested. Valda was so gracious to allow me an extra day for her birthday greeting.

     

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