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Gogyohka Poem
Tanka Collection
: Tasting the Summer Sun by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

waiting for the cool night,

I lie on fields of gold—

with a dry straw stem

in my salivating mouth 

tasting the summer sun

 

 

 

Author Notes
GOGYOHKA is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"One must maintain a little bit of summer, even in the middle of winter." - Henry David Thoreau

     

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