Exceptional Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 One Thousand Cranes : Deep Deep Inside by Gypsy Blue Rose

Deep deep inside me, burning memories erupt melting safety walls. Some say it has been too long to still grieve your loss, but a bursting torrential pain surfaces fast to rivers of fire and blood rushing to the crimson sea.               Author Notes CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine lines in a 5/7 /5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

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