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A Collom Lune
Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
: Night Lights by JLR
Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

 
Moonlight shines brightly.
Watch for Nightingale’s eyes gazing
Moons silvery light.
 
Catching sun rays
Dancing on the Moon’s surface
 Night lights beam.

 


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Author Notes
This is a Collom Lune contest. A Collom Lune is different from a Kelly Lune. There isn't a syllable count like the Kelly Lune. In a Collom Lune there are 3 words in
the 1st line, 5 words in 2nd line, 3 words in the 3rd line. Each line can stand alone as a complete thought, or the lines can run into each other in a continuation of a
sentence or phrase from one line of poetry to the next stanza.

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