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5/7/4/7/7 and 4/6/5/7/7 Somonka Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: Crest and Trough Waves by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of sexual content.
 
 
 
warm sand and crisp breeze
veil salty skins wrapped in sweat
   and lusty thoughts —
an ocean of emotions
in crest and trough waves


sand dunes and plains
beneath my starved fingers
   hungry for your love —
yearning to drown in the sea
of your aquamarine eyes



 

Author Notes
The Somonka, is a Japanese verse of two unrhymed poems (5/7/5/7/7 - 5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS exchanged between lovers in a statement and response form. The earliest Somonkas can be found as far back as the 1st century AD. click here, if you like, for more information ; . click here if you want to read morew

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem.

Gypsy

     

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