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So Rude

Kids teased, “Hey Jude"

Mocked, laughed and ridiculed

On playground they would not include

Poor Jude, who felt his shyness misconstrued

His friendly mood changed their fortitude

Then with them, he shared his food

Showed him gratitude

No more 'tude!

Crude



Writing Prompt
Former FanStory member, Y.M. Roger, originally created this form.

It requires a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-10-9-7-5-3-1. The first line is two syllables; the second line is four syllables, and so on until the last line is one syllable.

The first line and last line MUST be SYNONYMS.

There is no rhyme requirement, although it isn't discouraged. You are encouraged to center your poem, but it isn?t required.
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