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A Potlatch Club Entry - Triolet
Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
: Elixir of Life by JLR
Artwork by Susan F. M. T. at FanArtReview.com

Ornate blooms burst above receding snow
as the wet elixir quenches their deep thirst.
While warm rays seize the day, the sun aglow,
ornate blooms burst above receding snow.
New growth is seen on tips of leaves below.
Gray skies splash rains yet from another cloudburst.
Ornate blooms burst above receding snow
as the wet elixir quenches their deep thirst.

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Author Notes
A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines.

The 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat
and the 2nd and 8th lines repeat.
The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters represent the repeated lines.
Thanks for the use of Raindrops on the Fuchsia by Susan F. M. T. on FanArtReview.com

     

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