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Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
: Stay young by JLR

Before life's hardness tainted dreams
young friends sat by a river's bank
sharing each one's big hopes and schemes
painting a canvas that is blank.

The three boys and a girl closely knit
awash in a scene of idle chat
bring smiles to passerby who gets it
before his life was hit by a brickbat.

Togetherness is everything
as time stands still while being young
I say, " grasp hold of youth," and sing.
Dream large, no matter how far-flung!

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A Picture this club submission -- A viewers perspective
A triple quatrain in ababcdcdefef rythme in 8/9 meter

     

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