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5/5/7/6 Zen Naani Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: On An Empty Road by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
on an empty road,
I walk with the moon
     as my only companion —
tulips full of sadness
 

 

Author Notes
This naani poem is zen because it has a satori (last line) of enlightenment.

NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. === click here for examples -poetrysoup === click here for more information- shadowpoetry === click here for more information === poetry soup

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

     

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